Hey...
I have to agree with the other reviewer - your composition is very well done, but your sound quality is a bit midi-ish (the hat, in particular). In my opinion, it's the composition that's more difficult to get a handle on anyways, but even so; the same goes for your twinrova song. The song was very cleverly arranged (parallel fifths AHHHH), but it sounds kinda cheesy without effects and mastering.
Keep it up, crack-pot. I really enjoyed your stuff.